First of all, I think this story is rather well written and follows the original storyline quite well. Personally, the only real problems that I can currently think of are the lack of details in the bio, the grammar, and the lack of updates in over a month. Other than this, the story is quite good. I honestly hope the author has not abandoned this story or has had anything bad happen to them recently. I hope the author will return soon to continue the story and I wish him/her a good day/night.
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LIKEI forgot to mention that I have no idea of your updating schedule and hope that I do not offend you with my review.
Oh dear, I’m doing this an awful lot. I should’ve also mentioned that I have much enjoyed your current chapters and have high hopes for your story and its continuation. . . . . . I forgot what else I was gonna say. Anyways, I hope to see a new chapter as soon as you’re ready. If not, that’s perfectly. If it’s on hiatus though….…. I’ll be forced to drop it cause that kinda thing makes me upset when I find something wonderful and they stop. The other reason is because I have a very good memory for things I LIKE to read — such as this here — and it takes a REALLY long time to forget. . . . . . I have a bad memory for most other things though. SO PLEASE DON’T STOP WRITING!!! I truly enjoy the story so far (sorry for repeating, but it MUST be said over, and over, and over again to carve it into your mind).
