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Rating: 4.8

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Yami_RyuujinAuthor2yrYami_Ryuujin

Hey!Hey! Author here! I'm new so please advise me on popularising this book. Of course it's not just sharing it but also reviewing how I can or Should improve!. Helpful criticism is always welcome 😊 Thank you for Understanding if my writing styleis bad.

Attribute picking

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perfectspiceLv1perfectspice

I just think that your story is developing too fast , slow it down a little bit, may be try to make mc work hard to get even a single point attribute instead of directly promoting him to 1 star

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