Review Detail of HappyDragon in Pokemon: lazy new life

Item: Pokemon: lazy new life
Rating: 3

Review detail

HappyDragonLv12yrHappyDragon

I hate the Script style, horrible writing method unsuitable for a light novel or fanfic, ruining the immersion of reading and degrading my neurons with every time I see a "Me: What's up?".

Pokemon: lazy new life

Love_dem_fanfix

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Bryan_David_1962Lv1Bryan_David_1962

Finally, someone is pointing out the mistakes of this fan-fic. This was one of the most horrible writing style I have ever seen and I hate mc's style of talking. How is his language like that when has the knowledge of noble from his body's memory and knowledge given by GOD

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