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Grand_Go
Grand_GoLv131yr
2023-04-11 02:51

It is a cliche story and frustrating at the same time. The mc gets violent where it is not needed, meddles in others affairs and only dumbly replies when needed and there aren't any proper venting 😕 I was totally frustrated. The currency is confusing and what is this cliche romantic meetings between ml and fl. I feel very bad about reading it.

Hundred Times Income Multiplier System

Alan_Wafula
3.9
620 Chs

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_VOIDLESS_Lv11

To make matters worse they is Fking love triangle. It just makes matters worse

1yr
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ZhourongHephaestus
ZhourongHephaestusLv13

I am crying for the 1st time that this novel is no harem tagged

_VOIDLESS_:To make matters worse they is Fking love triangle. It just makes matters worse
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Alan_Wafula
Alan_WafulaAuthor

I'm back guys! Part two of this novel will be posted starting next month. The title of the novel is going to be: 'TWINS WITH SYSTEMS: COMPLETE THE MISSION'. See you guys then...

8mth

GamingwithGreat
GamingwithGreatLv12

Nice novel .. By the way here is the proof that Tatsumaki wears panties😂

1yr
Alan_Wafula
Alan_WafulaAuthor

Just the same old book. Just republished. Hope I haven't affected the flow by much.

1yr
BomberFury
BomberFuryLv5

MC's stupidity is extreme, after the car buying scene, I cannot read any further for the sake of my mental stability.

1yr
00Mark
00MarkLv1

Had potential but the whole "you're just a woman" was a massive turnoff for me, i don't get it, why make it as if his "fated" encounters with the girl were something special if you're going to downplay anything she does or says with "but she's just a girl", "just a mere female" and the childish "i can't ask her for help, she's a woman"? Might as well introduce her as a rival CEO so you can faceslap her as much as you want and keep the mc single.

1yr
Gamer_Boy_2840
Gamer_Boy_2840Lv4

The novel is pure garbage. The MC gets employees for a grocery store through agency and the 1st thing he does is go and get all of them Bentley's. His spending makes no sense and his ideas for earning money are not inspired at all.

1yr
Laborth29
Laborth29Lv12

so this mc is idiotic with no expience? then he have system?

1yr
Ajn_Jay
Ajn_JayLv2

Keep it up author. More updates Please 🙏🙏🙏

1yr
Ken_Kaneki_7610
Ken_Kaneki_7610Lv1

MC low iq. Author makes up numbers with no research even with the conversion he provided. I mean the Eurocopter is 150 mil aka 15 mil after conversion but hiring a pilot from a company for a year is 1 billion aka 100 million, absolutely makes no sense. He buys Bentleys first day of business to all his grocery store employees, no business sense what so ever. He has the biggest security company but he goes to fight a whole gang by himself with his plot armor. Dante family gives him big trouble and kidnaps his lover yet he forgives them because of George who should mean nothing to the MC as a delivery employee. He acts like a love stricken beta id-i-ot when looking at his 'fated lover' he tells her he stared at her for ten minutes straight, cant no one have a bit of dignity?

1yr
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