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MightyEagleLv151yr
2023-04-24 12:02

There are several flaws with this novel starting with it’s terrible economic system. First problem, readers don’t know which currency the author’s using. Second, it’s clear the author didn’t do any research for his novel, because customer and the MC over pay for everything. This novel has zero realism. So, how can the author solve these problems? First tell us if this is a real or fictional currency and give us the wholesale and retail prices. Next, do some research on what stuff actually cost.

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Alan_WafulaAuthor

I have to admit that for the first ten chapters or so, I didn't do research that much. But from around chapter 20, I made sure to do see research about what I was writing. Then, the currency, I sure stated that it ain't US dollars and its value is lower than that. In other words it's a novel generated currency. But, I changed back to USD from chapter 111 and I should be correcting the ones behind that soon enough.

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