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2022-06-11 16:28

the mc is too arrogant for my taste, I mean he can be arrogant of he has strength but he literally provoke the alchemist in chap 4 if it wasn't for plot armor he's already dead. oh well it's not my cup of tea but I'll still give a 3star cuz I only read four chap maybe it will be better in a few chap.

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I understand that the tags said that this would be a face slapping novel so obviously the main character is going to be arrogant and everyone else is going to kinda bad out to him and not actually think for themselves and just go along with everything that the main character says. That's fine with me however I do kind of have to draw the line when all the characters including the main character all act like there two dimensional. Mike really within the first 10 chapters we have our main character go to an alchemist place and apparently he knows every pill that there is and even made some of his own all of a sudden nose what type of pill it is and then once he has a woman serving him tea from whoever was making the pill because of a whole bunch of face flapping nonsense you know what usually happens in those kind of novels. But anyway what the main character does is to this woman that's kind of trying to seduce him probably brakes are completely degrades her and then flips around and says you're going to be my maid now and there's no room of discussion no yes she has no nose and then it just happens. I do like my overpowered novels or even my face swapping novels but when there to such an extent I can't get into the feel of it. If it's shoving your hand in someone's face who's being overtly arrogant and then I can get behind it but when the main characters acting like a real piece of s*** pure person and is an ungodly amount of arrogance for honestly Someone who lived a very not arrogant worthy life it's but hard to follow the novel. But hey I'm very aggressive when it comes to my reviews and I'm brutally honest and spill everything out that I think bad. The good parts of this novel can probably outshine the bad ones especially if you give it time but I'm not going to stick around for that. Keep writing author hope if you do any other books are not in the same type of face slapping genre because you're writing style not too bad

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