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I haven't read the rest of the chapter just yet, I had to stop in the mid-way. The reason is, the starting was not consistent. I suggest try to fix the grammar just a little bit more and add some precise details.

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Thanks for your opinion, and I will try improve it, so look forward for the future chapters.