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DollyRoma
DollyRomaLv132yr
2022-03-03 09:24

This novel has so much potential and the author has a very bright imagination, but while the idea is superb, there are multiple obstacles stopping this work from being amazing. The grammar isn't poor enough to make the novel unreadable, but it sometimes makes the story hard to follow. The flow of the story is extremely confusing at times and the characters are slightly underdeveloped. However, there's a nice splash of humor throughout that makes the novel interesting and the synopsis has a nice sense of allure to it even though it seems slightly forced. Overall, this work has a bright future and I hope the author does not take offense to my honest review. All the best with your writing! [img=recommend][img=recommend]

Game of lust: Crown Prince's maid

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DelzGB
DelzGBLv14

While not many chapters have released yet, it's easy to see the potential this story has to offer! The synopsis is enough to bring you in, and the dialogue and drama between the characters is enough to make you stay. Check it out!

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Ak02
Ak02Lv12

It really is a nice piece. It's lengthy but detailed. It makes you feel like you're there. Everything is so good and worth ur time to read it. u will anticipate each chapter. Keep up your good work, author.

2yr
modestbaddie
modestbaddieAuthor

Shameless author giving her own work 5.0 but hey, I am in love with my book. It's one of my babies. I am really grateful to you all for reading this book. It means a lot to me. You can also read my other book. Don't forget to shower my books with love. Take 馃悏 everyone. You are loved and worth it. Never forgot that!

2yr
Zuzu_1
Zuzu_1Lv12

this novel is very intriguing and am enjoying it a lot, the characters are very interesting as the story goes, although he story is a slow burn, give it a try because it's worth your time. so kudos to the author on such an incredible work馃憦馃憦馃憤[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Saher_Abidi
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The discription is very good and detailed and i like how author able to pictured every character very smoothly 馃槈 The author has a good writing skills... the story can easily understand and i hope for the growth of your book 鉂わ笍鈽猴笍

2yr
drippingsarcasm
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The synopsis is what caught my attention. It makes one want to know what's going on inside of the book. I read the first chapter and it was really funny. Best of luck with this book.

2yr
IAmTheQueen
IAmTheQueenLv3

I just started reading and I couldn't stop myself from laughing. The synopsis seems so mysterious and I can't wait to discover the upcoming mysteries.

2yr
Unknown_sinner
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I'm officially about to begin reading this馃グ I believe it'll grant that satisfaction I crave 馃槓

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Isaac_black
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Good job author, you improved chapafter another, great story with amazing writing style, i loved the mc and your descriptions. The plot was well written and your knowledge made great touch to the chapters keep up the good work

2yr
Idyllic_Scribe
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I like this book. I'm usually not the type for lengthy books, but this one is very detailed, which makes it work. I think that the uniqueness 'and sometimes meta' just makes the book even better. Good job author!

2yr
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