Review Detail of ThePandaCritic in Multiverse: Reaper

The grammar is ok. The initial premise was interesting. The master of any weapon was already grounds for an Op Mc. But why give a devil fruit with so much power it basically over shawowed his mastery of all weapons because he's alrsy so powerful now training does really feels like he's growing as a character. I know u have the overpowered tag but the story is so fast pace power wish.the Mc can be Op and still grow. He's just got the powers and capable of so much summons and with his power being used it feels out of place in a one-piece world. He's a walking army I'm guessing he doesn't need a crew. All in all this story isn't bad for your first but u to me u killed the interest of the Mc but giving him two Op powers. To me, one outshines the other you forget he has another power.