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Immortal_Goddess
Immortal_GoddessLv152yrImmortal_Goddess

Review until Chapter 40: Translation quality needs improvement. Using the word BROUGHT to denote an item paid for in this novel was wrong. It should be BOUGHT. CORE for CAR. etc. Too many wrong spellings and pronoun used. Also, mistaking one character’s name for another.🤦🏻‍♀️🤦🏻‍♀️🤦🏻‍♀️ Characters are okay. Typical delusional villainess who thinks the FL’s family is hers. Well, she can have since Yao Tang doesn’t care a bit about it. For once, the FL has a better store card than the ML. Hahaha!!!😈😈😈😈. The FL is like Qin Ran.😉 Plot is okay too. I’m curious about that Taoist Master who made the prediction for Yao Tang. I want to know the full prediction. This is a good read. I need the raws too.😇😇😇

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Immortal_Goddess
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Very similar to Gu Mang’s Story. The translator even called Yao Tang as Miss Gu during the saving the matriarch of the ML family. Even her Class is 1-20 same with Gu Mang. Read the story of Gu Mang. It’s a good story.😊 FL was copied from Gu Mang and Qin Ran.