FOR NOW (chapter 40) - decent. A couple of things come out of nowhere/there's some dodgy descriptions, but mostly it's okay. We've already encountered one of the things in the description (FL whipping out the ol' black diamond card) which is a nice change from the usual 1000-chapters-in-and-haven't-gotten-to-X-Y-or-Z-in-blurb-yet. Characters are pretty standard. Not exactly sold on the ML - he seems like an idolised stalker? But the interactions FL has with her classmates are nice (and the "class bully" already knows that the FL is not to be messed with so that's a nice change of pace). I'd be sad if this wasn't one of the chosen stories, but I'm also wary about how the quality will be going forwards. (There's also some weird translations where she/he/him/her are mixed up).
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