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Holy_Roon
Holy_RoonLv52yr
2022-02-04 21:44

it's always nice to see to see A martial Peak fanfiction. the start is quite interesting and I hope it's stays interesting. though the Grammer May need some editing but it is quite readable and I hope it will improve over time. you are doing a great job Arthur keep going

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inner_pa1n
inner_pa1nAuthor

would try to improve as I write but I have a request can anyone suggest me a good novel as I have nothing to read currently except for the ongoing ones which take too long to upload.

Holy_Roon
Holy_RoonLv5

Give Quest Maker of Soul land a try

inner_pa1n:would try to improve as I write but I have a request can anyone suggest me a good novel as I have nothing to read currently except for the ongoing ones which take too long to upload.
inner_pa1n
inner_pa1nAuthor

I am not talking about fan fictions I want original cn novels, mtl works for me as well

Holy_Roon:Give Quest Maker of Soul land a try
Holy_Roon
Holy_RoonLv5

ah i see. dont remember any good ones

inner_pa1n:I am not talking about fan fictions I want original cn novels, mtl works for me as well
inner_pa1n
inner_pa1nAuthor

ah sad

Holy_Roon:ah i see. dont remember any good ones
BLACK_GLOOM
BLACK_GLOOMLv11

House of horrors in horror genre It's a good read, if you like scary novels

inner_pa1n:would try to improve as I write but I have a request can anyone suggest me a good novel as I have nothing to read currently except for the ongoing ones which take too long to upload.
inner_pa1n
inner_pa1nAuthor

other than scary if I can ask

BLACK_GLOOM:House of horrors in horror genre It's a good read, if you like scary novels
Sinful_Cyanide
Sinful_CyanideLv15

So, this is a fanfiction then? Hmm, I might not continue then

cliche_reader
cliche_readerLv13

are there any other fan fics of martial prak? if yes can you list them

cliche_reader
cliche_readerLv13

genre?

inner_pa1n:would try to improve as I write but I have a request can anyone suggest me a good novel as I have nothing to read currently except for the ongoing ones which take too long to upload.
inner_pa1n
inner_pa1nAuthor

I would like to read a novel in which the protagonist builds a world within himself and cultivates using faith. I am being a little specific because that's kinda similar to my other novel named CREATION GOD hence an inspiration for that will help

cliche_reader:genre?
Holy_Roon
Holy_RoonLv5

they are dropped

cliche_reader:are there any other fan fics of martial prak? if yes can you list them
ExaltedCrow
ExaltedCrowLv13

Only novel I remember where a protagonist cultivates (not a cheat) a world inside them is Stellar Transformation, but that’s not using faith. Don’t even think I’ve seen more than two fics where mc uses faith in some way.

inner_pa1n:I would like to read a novel in which the protagonist builds a world within himself and cultivates using faith. I am being a little specific because that's kinda similar to my other novel named CREATION GOD hence an inspiration for that will help
THE_SIN_OF_LUST
THE_SIN_OF_LUSTLv3

bro when are you going to continue your "fan-fic" it's been more than a year

ExaltedCrow:Only novel I remember where a protagonist cultivates (not a cheat) a world inside them is Stellar Transformation, but that’s not using faith. Don’t even think I’ve seen more than two fics where mc uses faith in some way.
proking
prokingLv11

Try Records of Mortals journey to immortality. it's available in wuxiaworld. proper translation website.

inner_pa1n:I am not talking about fan fictions I want original cn novels, mtl works for me as well
ExaltedCrow
ExaltedCrowLv13

…Some day

THE_SIN_OF_LUST:bro when are you going to continue your "fan-fic" it's been more than a year
THE_SIN_OF_LUST
THE_SIN_OF_LUSTLv3

please let it be soon because you left me high and dry

ExaltedCrow:…Some day
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Willex_Void
Willex_VoidLv4

Reborn as eevee

ExaltedCrow:…Some day
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