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This is one of the good fanfics on the website. the author's English is spot on and the character doesn't do a tech uplift very quickly as if he knows how new items were invented at the time of the renaissance. The guy isn't completely Mary Sue either as he is shown to make mistakes at times. The plot is well except for a very few mistakes. Looking forward to seeing how the MC deals with Joffrey.

this has to be of the best GOT fanfic the only problem i have with it is it update frequency .........................................................................................................................................................

I will be honest while the story is pretty good but it's not for me. The cheat he got isn't Op enough and the story. progression is a little slow. The worst thing for me personally is that I am not anticipating the future of the story. Some people might like this but I personally don't.

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Only problems with this novel are 1. author doesnt know what hes talking about half the time but DOEs listen to comments and accept criticism so (respect for that) 2. attempts to make humorous moments that fall flat (sorry bro, those jokes are NOT hitting lol) 3. 10 year old seggs scenes (need i say more?) 4. 80% of this story is about a 10 year old. Cant get into a story about a child, authors need to learn theres nothing interesting about reading about children doing things lol 5. MC constantly talks about how “he’ll never be as good as Jaime. Or anyone else” and yet the MC doesnt even attempt to better himself .-. Bro literally heals and recovers faster than normal people (that was his wish) and constantly cries about how hes never getting better 6. he uses a bow and arrow 🤢

Like the concept, but background should be given a little depth. Keeping the chracter realistic is appreciated, its what makes the story interesting. its nice to see it updated regularly . I would like if u explore MC's relationship with Cersei as she is the only sibling he is not interacted much thus far, and prefer if u give his relationships with women a little depth unlike other harem or multixOC fictions. Thanks for writing this story, its nice to read and pls update soon.

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pff...this could be really good but sadly it is not.. Mc is just a disappointment ! Plus many wrong info..as petyr was master of coins when Robert become King and other small details who is totally wrong. That saw us Author doesn't know the original story as good as he believes!

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