if this is the author's first fanfic, then the author is well written. and now to business. I read 9 chapters and finished on this unfortunately I am not interested in the continuation because as for me I will be very disappointed because the forces are not suitable for this world, especially to be a villain. Acnologia's powers are absolutely useless against Aizen, in the anime itself it was said that the only option to defeat him is to be blind, his zanpakutō's ability is too great and the only option that he could use is haki, seriously observation haki is ideal, and if you choose some yonko as powers, it's much better than Acnologia, for example Shanks is a swordsman, a pistol master, all three hacks and would fit the role of being a villain for good. Many will say he will have a Zanpakutō ooooo you are too naive my friend. I'm willing to bet that the author will bet on acnologia's fascination with the power of acnologia and its association with zanpakutō is possible. from this, perhaps the author will make another hot in other words, he will fight with Aizen after he gets the hogyoku and yes, in this case, there is a huge chance of defeating him, but again, Aizen is a genius and very powerful for him, killing him before his Bankai is easy, and in a battle of wits they won't fight Aizen was written too well and made a very strong villain out of him, the only reason for his sealing ( WARNING SEALING) is his arrogance. okay, let's not think so far, maybe the author will be able to write a good battle between them, which I don't believe in. The 2nd moment is not a villain, for 9 chapters there are only 2 sentences about his atrocities. As an author, you must understand that when writing a story about a villain, you should write his atrocities and not skip them, leaving your readers to imagine it for themselves. this moment completely nullifies the first 3 chapters because they are really well written. 3rd moment the system why is it? I don't understand why it exists at all. 4th moment of the relationship, the author writes terribly you need to work on it. why terrible? it’s just that in one paragraph he takes off a few days in the second for a month already, the author doesn’t even write timeskips. 5th moment, yes, yes, this is not the end, the author rarely writes them, which affects the go, since the feeling that it develops only in an instant, and not slowly. on this all the main remarks end if you have read so far congratulations your chatterbox shuts up. I write with google translator