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Zabne123
Zabne123Lv152yr
2022-04-09 11:16

First off I don't like how the synopsis is not even close to the story. I shouldn't be so confused right off the bat because I'm trying to compare the story especially when put in specific details in the synopsis. Once I got that out the way I tried to actually enjoy the read. I feel it can be a funny read if the story wasn't all over the place changing to different character perspectives at the drop of a hat. The author doesn't do a good job of explaining well really anything either so I feel the story is like a giant puzzle I have to put together sometimes. I do like the idea of the story and I feel if it was explained better it would be more enjoyable because it's something original of which you don't see all that often. I'll keep reading tho hoping it improves.

I Receive Directions To Become The Supreme Demon In My Sister's Novel

Younger Sister
2.6
40 Chs

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merri_dono
merri_donoLv4

the title doesn't match the story even if match those girl with system is just filler even the world are not written by her sister we never knew who the sister he the one who write the world why just be straight forward about the summary and not destryo the expectations of the readers..

2yr

Kilaske
KilaskeLv6

The synopsis and the novel is completely different. Stopped reading after knowing that female lead got a system that would force her to have a relationship with MC. For those who continued to read, please tell me if it's actually good(even with the forced love story), then I'll delete my review.

2yr
HolyDragon17
HolyDragon17Lv4

Haha looks interesting! I've seen novels with similar premise for Otome reincarnations on JPs but never for a CN. I didn't think there would be a story like this. Well too soon to judge but maybe it'll be good???

2yr
Cyrs
CyrsLv11

Synopsis are from other novel, instead of a novel with a good premise we recive the old harem story with all the world existing only to satisfy the pevert wishes from the author.

2yr
LucasA25
LucasA25Lv4

Hope this gets picked! Concept seems unique and like an interesting way to get OP, If there’s no racism then it should be pretty good. . . . .

2yr
Alexander_Ronald_9347
Alexander_Ronald_9347Lv11

The summary is fake, got my hopes up for nothing............................................................................................................

2yr
DaoistTm12ED
DaoistTm12EDLv4

Don't waste your time here. .................................................................................................................

2yr
JackVonCrack
JackVonCrackLv4

my prognosis is to leave this novel alone, the synopsis is a straight up lie and the storytelling is bland and forced. the content to him getting his power up is skipped, his first loss is skipped. the storytelling principle of show dont tell is simply ignored. small spoiler-> rough plot direction the female lead is shoved to the mcs arms almost instantly, without any real content except her having a system which forces her to give herself to him against her own will. this seems like a not so much thought out power fantasy. i do have to say that the synopsis really sounded exciting, so this is a huge disappointment...

2yr
INVRLied
INVRLiedLv5

It's a clickbait. The Summary/Title don't match the written story. The real Title must be something like "Protagonist Girls with System are Chasing me After I Got Transmigrated in my Own Novel".

2yr
MOHAMED_OP
MOHAMED_OPLv1

I was very excited about this novel but in the end it turned out that the title and the story are fake as the novel is bad and just an old harem to satisfy the desires of the author

2yr
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