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Rhongomynaid
RhongomynaidLv12yr
2022-05-07 01:51

Well above average but still too early to say anything conclusive. -Flawed but overall OK translation. -Interesting concept, plot has decent potential. -Worldbuilding is intentionally unclear, so I can't really evaluate it. -MC seems sentient but everybody else is a mob character. (So far apart from the MC there only seems to be 2 noteworthy named side characters; the general and the adjutant and even they seem to have limited use. Not much has been introduced). Overall not too well written but not too bad either. This does come across as awfully bland at times but it is nonetheless one of the stronger novels from this batch. 3/5.

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Rhongomynaid
RhongomynaidLv1

yes.

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daremetochoosemyna
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Okay.

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