Review Detail of LucienNg in MMORPG : Rise of the Interstellar God

The idea itself seems fun, and the MC can be relatable at times. Well, since this type of genre is popular these days, the story can be repetitive, but I see the author has pulled it quite nicely. The only problem I have is with the writing quality. I understand it isnt easy to be g-free, but maybe give your chapters a re-run whenever you have time? Though people always improve with practice, so I believe this problem will be solved soon. Overall, good luck to your future journey.