this had potential till you did one the worst things your could evee do 1. you made your mc evil thats just trash. all evil mc are just trash. 2. you forced corrupted and forced made the mc evil for litteraly no reason you made ut clear the ring would corrupt and twist the wearer yet the mc still chose the ring? why? thats stupid it would change who he is...the moment you amde this chkice this was no longer about an mc who went back in time to have a second chsnce at ljfe but a while new person that is just trash...
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