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Lazyboi
LazyboiLv42yrLazyboi

I feel great potential with this fic because the concept of Gilgamesh in Danmachi is quite rare so I would like to see how this will fare. The idea of Bell being a female is also intriguing and the only fic I know that has a female Bell was abandoned so I am excited to see her interaction in the harem if it ever came to be. The grammar should be google translated and I don't see that much problem in it but I advised the author to study English a little to fix some wordings in the fic. They're sometime an eyesore to look at.

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Gilgamesh In Danmachi

DaisukeLucifer456

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DaisukeLucifer456
DaisukeLucifer456AuthorDaisukeLucifer456

I will try to fix my problem with English and with respect to bell woman I think you will like the idea and if she will be in the harem

Pill_God
Pill_GodLv13Pill_God

Oh if you're here, then i will give it a try. Not like grammar bothers me much