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TheNeeD
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2022-02-03 21:16

One chapter was enough for me to understand the following: 1) A complete disappointment, not a story: a) This is hypocrisy from the hero in a few paragraphs. I laughed for a long time, and then I felt sad. "I will not be as arrogant as Gilgamesh.", passes a couple of paragraphs "I must be stronger than the adventurer king" b) Strange, as for me, the choice of the family. Although even here it is clear how the hero of this story is "Not arrogant". 2) A complete violation of the concept of development in this world. a) Development is based on overcoming and passing its limits. b) The question follows from this: What is the interest in watching a character who is already the strongest? If you think about it, then you can enter a couple more reasons here, but this is already a subjective opinion. As a result: The story ended for me before it started.

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Tog_Python
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TheNeeD
TheNeeDLv2

What can I say other than "praise" for the timeliness of this advice? Thank you, otherwise I didn't realize that I had to stop reading this work when I saw enough "ingenious" solutions in half a chapter.

liemtung_Nieli
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example of modern humans. does not want to accept good advice from readers and tells readers to leave. Is it no longer free to express opinions nowadays?

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