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ChildishSin
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2022-02-03 11:33

Good job just a bit of OOC but that's to be expected since one of the major plot characters personality is different and is affecting canon. So don't expect a lot of characters being the same. The pace of the story is pretty good to not too fast that you get confused, not too slow that you get bored. But the dialogues are very confusing as the author uses (-) to indicate if a character is talking not(" ").

Hela The Goddess of Death

GorMartsen
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Thank you. Ah, right. - VS “” Okay, I see a point here and I actually need to switch to “”. The style that I use is actually something that I used to see in my first language. (Russian if you interested) So, for some unknown to me reason, I started to use that style, instead to style common known for English native ppl. Sorry about that.

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Elliot_Jackson
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This story is pretty dope. The only down sides are the dialogue, it's very weird to me, and the first chapter is a bit of a turn off, because the paragraphs are too big. But get passed the first paragraph, and it becomes an extremely fun read. I look forward to more bro, thanks for the story

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Amylilin
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Very good work with the characters. I think that is a nice interpretation on them even if some can be OOC by canon MCU (or what some people tell that is canon). Hela is a very complex and being a reincarnation even more. The only think that I don't like is the update time 🤣.

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Phoenix1998
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Please update more. . .. . . .Great. Excited for more. This is good so far.Great. Excited for more. This is good so far.Great. Excited for more. This is good so far. . . . . . . . . . . . .

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Ahmed_Maged
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this is really one of the best mcu fic awesome fic awesome fic awesome fic awesome fic awesome fic awesome fic awesome fic awesome fic awesome fic awesome fic awesome fic awesome fic awesome fic awesome fic awesome fic awesome fic

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GorMartsen
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Self review Okay ppl. I got nuts here and story is complex and long. it will take time to write it down. I will appreciate any support and help. Let’s keep my spirit high and productive

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