Review Detail of TheAntiAkumar in Danmachi: Bell Cranel adventurer extraordinaire!

Item: Danmachi: Bell Cranel adventurer extraordinaire!
Rating: 2.6

Review detail

TheAntiAkumarLv12yrTheAntiAkumar

I've yet to get too far into this story, and I have no clue whether or not I will get much farther into this story, because the grammar is horrible.. Like I can handle the non-capitalization and extra punctuation like "!!!!!", but what I can't handle is the spelling mistakes like Fallowed, awaken instead of awakened, Bell instead of Bell's, fallowed after the man. They walked trough... TROUGH? I was reading this as I was typing the review and when I hit that line I had to close the book... Because no matter how good the story might MIGHT end up being, if the author consistently misspells that many words in a single sentence I just can't keep reading it.

Danmachi: Bell Cranel adventurer extraordinaire!

some_random_dude1

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Replies13

Lv3

you'll get used to it

2yr

RuffyRaphLv4RuffyRaph

I also feel pain from misspellls thanks for the warning.

2yr

DarnelljoeLv14Darnelljoe

2yr

some_random_dude1Authorsome_random_dude1

yeah, yeah. I'm searching for someone that could check my grammar, or a good app/site that can fix it. for now you either deal with it, or don't read the story at all.

2yr

some_random_dude1Authorsome_random_dude1

I mean, it's your choice. can't force you to do anything.

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2yr

DAOIST_SUPREMELv4DAOIST_SUPREME

True

some_random_dude1:I mean, it's your choice. can't force you to do anything.

2yr

WashuruLv12Washuru

its called grammarly

some_random_dude1:yeah, yeah. I'm searching for someone that could check my grammar, or a good app/site that can fix it. for now you either deal with it, or don't read the story at all.

2yr

some_random_dude1Authorsome_random_dude1

Already done my dude.

Washuru:its called grammarly

2yr

DarnelljoeLv14Darnelljoe

Well, apparently you missed a spot.

some_random_dude1:Already done my dude.

2yr

some_random_dude1Authorsome_random_dude1

explain, please. what spot did I miss? I edited my chapters with Grammarly from the 3rd chapter up. the first 2 chapters were just an list of changes and heads up on things that some readers may not like so I didn't edit those. which is a stupid decision now that I think about if.

Darnelljoe:Well, apparently you missed a spot.

2yr

DarnelljoeLv14Darnelljoe

I'm not your editor nor do I remember where.

some_random_dude1:explain, please. what spot did I miss? I edited my chapters with Grammarly from the 3rd chapter up. the first 2 chapters were just an list of changes and heads up on things that some readers may not like so I didn't edit those. which is a stupid decision now that I think about if.

2yr

some_random_dude1Authorsome_random_dude1

what? I know you are not my editor, I just asked what spot I missed. Sorry if it sounded rude, it was not my intention.

Darnelljoe:I'm not your editor nor do I remember where.

2yr

Nepsoul_DeadlyLv1Nepsoul_Deadly

Microsoft word auto correct could help if only a little

2yr

ManiacisLv1Maniacis

.....

some_random_dude1:what? I know you are not my editor, I just asked what spot I missed. Sorry if it sounded rude, it was not my intention.

2yr