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TheAntiAkumar
TheAntiAkumarLv12yr
2022-02-07 09:51

I've yet to get too far into this story, and I have no clue whether or not I will get much farther into this story, because the grammar is horrible.. Like I can handle the non-capitalization and extra punctuation like "!!!!!", but what I can't handle is the spelling mistakes like Fallowed, awaken instead of awakened, Bell instead of Bell's, fallowed after the man. They walked trough... TROUGH? I was reading this as I was typing the review and when I hit that line I had to close the book... Because no matter how good the story might MIGHT end up being, if the author consistently misspells that many words in a single sentence I just can't keep reading it.

Danmachi: Bell Cranel adventurer extraordinaire!

some_random_dude1
4.1
40 Chs

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RuffyRaph
RuffyRaphLv4

I also feel pain from misspellls thanks for the warning.

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Darnelljoe
DarnelljoeLv14

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some_random_dude1
some_random_dude1Author

yeah, yeah. I'm searching for someone that could check my grammar, or a good app/site that can fix it. for now you either deal with it, or don't read the story at all.

2yr
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some_random_dude1
some_random_dude1Author

I mean, it's your choice. can't force you to do anything.

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DAOIST_SUPREME
DAOIST_SUPREMELv4

True

some_random_dude1:I mean, it's your choice. can't force you to do anything.
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Washuru
WashuruLv13

its called grammarly

some_random_dude1:yeah, yeah. I'm searching for someone that could check my grammar, or a good app/site that can fix it. for now you either deal with it, or don't read the story at all.
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some_random_dude1
some_random_dude1Author

Already done my dude.

Washuru:its called grammarly
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Darnelljoe
DarnelljoeLv14

Well, apparently you missed a spot.

some_random_dude1:Already done my dude.
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some_random_dude1
some_random_dude1Author

explain, please. what spot did I miss? I edited my chapters with Grammarly from the 3rd chapter up. the first 2 chapters were just an list of changes and heads up on things that some readers may not like so I didn't edit those. which is a stupid decision now that I think about if.

Darnelljoe:Well, apparently you missed a spot.
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Darnelljoe
DarnelljoeLv14

I'm not your editor nor do I remember where.

some_random_dude1:explain, please. what spot did I miss? I edited my chapters with Grammarly from the 3rd chapter up. the first 2 chapters were just an list of changes and heads up on things that some readers may not like so I didn't edit those. which is a stupid decision now that I think about if.
2yr
some_random_dude1
some_random_dude1Author

what? I know you are not my editor, I just asked what spot I missed. Sorry if it sounded rude, it was not my intention.

Darnelljoe:I'm not your editor nor do I remember where.
2yr
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Nepsoul_Deadly
Nepsoul_DeadlyLv1

Microsoft word auto correct could help if only a little

2yr
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Maniacis
ManiacisLv1

.....

some_random_dude1:what? I know you are not my editor, I just asked what spot I missed. Sorry if it sounded rude, it was not my intention.
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Please move your novel in anime and manga section you will get more readers and reviews. I want you to continue this novel so it will motivate you if you will get reviews and power stones.....

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it is weirdly rare to find a fanfic of danmachi as bell. ufdhxhfxhfdydutxugcgcugjgcjgxcjgcjgugcuxgugxjgxjgcugcugxjjgxugcgccucugfcggcxgxgx

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love the story pls update it. i cant wait for the next chapter its been 8 months

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really liking it, it doesnt follow canon but big plus bc canon is annoying and the characters in this fanfic are much more fun and its way more entertaining to see their interactions

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born_stupid
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please keep updating. its really hard to find good danmachi fanfics and please don't drop it.,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.., ,., , , , , , , , , ,., , , , , ,

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yo when are you going to update because i don't want this fanfic to be dropped this is one of the best danmachi fanfic i have read

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