《ch1 to 11》 ▪︎Writing Quality.............☆☆☆☆○ ▪︎Story Development.....☆○○○○ - hmm. boring - the mc gets stronger throug achievement. for every achievements he gets, he gets a free spin. by every spin he gets a random anime character. with 100% instant learn(so no training required). - fast paced and allot of time skip - the adults in this ff has a very low iq ▪︎Character Design........☆☆○○○ - he has no personality - boring mc(due to instant op) - he's behavior feels so force. ▪︎Updating Stability........☆☆☆☆○ ▪︎World Background.......☆☆☆☆○ 《 this ff has similar vibe with other ffs that gets dropped》
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