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2024-06-12 13:13

Before anything else, I'd like to thank the author for bringing this work of art to life! Thank you very much for your hardwork! There was some grammatical errors in the first few chapters but it didn't affect the story which I'm thankful for. The story development is both fast paced and not. Fast paced in terms of the fighting scenes but slow paced when it comes to the emotional side of things. Character built wise, the conflicting emotions of Raven / Ash was understandable given everything she's been through but it got slightly annoying at some point. And I agree with Dagne / Dags that Sage doesn't deserve someone like Raven. I was hoping Amara / Lucifer / Cypher would eventually drop her cold demeanor towards Raven and be honest with her feelings. But when Amara did so, it was already too late. This made me love and hate Amara's character for being "human." I feel the same way with her twin sister, Angelica / Lydia however, that's mainly because of Lydia's manipulative tendencies. The ending was painfully predictable but I'm still glad that everyone had their happy ever after ending despite all that chaos.

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