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2022-10-14 16:57

It's a decent read I won't say its extremely good or bad. It has a plot hole that I have pointed out twice to the author but he chose to ignore but It doesn't really affect the story as much but at the end of the day its still a plothole so it irks me somewhat. There isn't much to say regarding plot since it has been following the main story to an extent with no variations except for the MC giving Tatsuki or whatever her name is power and going to train with the Visored to me it just feels like the MC is just going along with the plot he hasn't stated any real goals so far as of chapter 21 and i find that lacking. Now onto the personal stuff (this didn't affect my review). The reason im dropping is because like i said the MC doesnt really have a goal and i really wanted to see something thats not just a guy going about to save Rukia and for whatever reason i dont know why he's doing it since he has never interacted with the other characters to the point where they'd call themselves friends its barely to the point where they're acquittances. Might be unreasonable but as soon as i knew he had Yhwach's ability to carve words into souls i expected a guy that become something akin to a Monarch he even has the power to raise the Shadow of things he kills but alas i guess it wasn't meant to be or I'm judging too early. Also slightly dislike how he granted Tatsuki powers but all she wants to do is punch him every chance she gets and he just allows her i guess, just feels eh.

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Thank you, you saved me a considerable amount of time.

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