Review Detail of Omensblood in My Hollywood System

Have to say I was pleasantly surprised by this story. At first I was skeptical, but it delivered quite a good story. As my first review I have to say well done to the author for this novel. The only complaint I have is Will's and June's relationship. It seems forced and would love just a few more chapters for just them. Their relationship seems to be going well but at times it feels like June is slowly being forgotten. Other than that as of now after binge reading all the chapters so far I have to say keep up the great work and I'm anticipating more!