Poorly translated with wuxia-like jargons. I'm only adding 5 stars to balance the reviews out and because I'm not that particular about grammar. I care more about the author's ability to tell their story, and the author of this fanfic does a good job with that, imo. It starts kicking off at around 200 chapters when the canon timeline begins. By then, the characters and MC's background is already fleshed out and the initial part feels more like a prologue, making the pay-off and start of Luffy's journey 100x better. than 99% of One Piece fanfics. The MC joins Luffy, not as a stranger but as someone who is deeply ingrained in the One Piece world, due to him existing years before the timeline starts. By the time Luffy sets sail, the MC already has a reputation as well as connections with the various canon characters, making the small tweaks in canon events along their journey something to look forward to.
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LIKEInsta_username:So we have to read 200 freaking chapters first to get to good part đ