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Envyous_098Lv43yr
2022-01-25 11:41

i am gonna say, this is pretty good novel with a little unexpected plot, you know when i see like the mc is mobs and he gets rejected he gonna despair and TADA appear heroine from nowhere and mc gonna revenge to the one who reject him and ntr confirmed. but i like the twist of mc and hero and in my own opinion (a little advice), it would be good if u get a nice backstory for the yandere and not just give her backstory like fell in love in the first sight bull**"". that's for now, i would like to see the plot for the next chapter and i wish the author have a luck in his side (i am sorry, english isn't my native)

I Was Not Looking For A Yandere Harem At All.

Parmesan
4.6
101 Chs

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SomethingIDKLv12

Before I read and get invested in this story can I know what the NTR you mentioned in your review is? Is it just the rejection or is it more?

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Envyous_098Lv4

type of where there is bit** that maybe heroine in the start but bit** in the end (search for malty merlomarc from the rising of the shield hero if u want the more clear description)

SomethingIDK:Before I read and get invested in this story can I know what the NTR you mentioned in your review is? Is it just the rejection or is it more?
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Envyous_098Lv4

u know something like, she reject mc, she betray him and try to kill him

3yr
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SomethingIDKLv12

Thanks for the help, I’ll check the story out.

Envyous_098:u know something like, she reject mc, she betray him and try to kill him
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_Mimic_Lv13

I can give the all clear. Just rejection.

SomethingIDK:Before I read and get invested in this story can I know what the NTR you mentioned in your review is? Is it just the rejection or is it more?
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ParmesanAuthor

Hi guys, it's me, Parmesan. The author. As we are reaching chapter 50 (49 to be exact) I would like to say a few words about my work. 0. I hate Beta MC. Expect none of this. 1. If you are not reaching chapter 10, I am afraid that you have not seen the Yan in the Yandere part. Trust me. They get WAY WORSE. Expect kidnapping, killing, torturing in the near future. I do have more plans. 2. This work of mine is not really a fast-food fighting wuxia novel. We do have lots of fighting, and I try to make them as exciting as possible, but I want to make the actual feelings and emotions of the characters shine. The psychological part can be too much for some. For that, I am sorry. 3. Things can be confusing at first, but plot holes will be covered the more you keep on reading. I intended to do so (hehe). Clues of the world are also spreaded through chapters, 1 has been uncovered by readers (I'm proud) before explaining. Yet they are still very deeply burried. 4. GIVE ME YOUR COMPLIMENTS AND YOUR STONES!!!!

3yr
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Lion_SinghLv5

I must say the start is pretty good and this novel has tremendous potential because of its uniqueness and also because of how realistic emotions are depicted here. I hope people may try this novel and hopefully this work don't get dropped.

3yr
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NontrLv12

Good story, hope someday he can get revenge angainst her childhood friend. Good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good

3yr
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JohjLv13

Excellent Story looks very promising, hope it contines and gains more attention!

3yr
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ChummyLv13

drop this instead creating cult for hero, making cult for sam was more likeable because this novel was yandere harem but hero has more interesting yandere harem than Mc, its too much plot for hero why not just kill sam if you more give hero plot armor than sam author? Hope build more interesting story for Mc yandere harem than hero harem i wanted to drop but seeing the others review i continue to read I'm not good at reviewing so sorry if you do not like (ﾉ≧∇≦)ﾉ

2yr
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MikrokoksLv3

After reading it again, only thing I liked was the writing quality. I hate every character in this novel and they are unbearable to read about. Previously I give it 2 stars but that was to harsh, so after reading it again I give it 3.6 stars. If you like yandere go for it.

2yr
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johnquitLv2

of course it will be 5 star, thanks for the story bro lần đầu đọc wn của người việt, chất quá bạn ơi[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Alex_4407Lv10

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Bread_DoggoLv11

Good book, good grammer, good worldbuildings and characters. If you are a new reader trust me give it about 30 chapters, the payout is worth it.

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