webnovel
Envyous_098
Envyous_098Lv43yr
2022-01-25 19:41

i am gonna say, this is pretty good novel with a little unexpected plot, you know when i see like the mc is mobs and he gets rejected he gonna despair and TADA appear heroine from nowhere and mc gonna revenge to the one who reject him and ntr confirmed. but i like the twist of mc and hero and in my own opinion (a little advice), it would be good if u get a nice backstory for the yandere and not just give her backstory like fell in love in the first sight bull**"". that's for now, i would like to see the plot for the next chapter and i wish the author have a luck in his side (i am sorry, english isn't my native)

Liked by 7 people

LIKE
Replies5
SomethingIDK
SomethingIDKLv12

Before I read and get invested in this story can I know what the NTR you mentioned in your review is? Is it just the rejection or is it more?

Envyous_098
Envyous_098Lv4

type of where there is bit** that maybe heroine in the start but bit** in the end (search for malty merlomarc from the rising of the shield hero if u want the more clear description)

SomethingIDK:Before I read and get invested in this story can I know what the NTR you mentioned in your review is? Is it just the rejection or is it more?
image
Envyous_098
Envyous_098Lv4

u know something like, she reject mc, she betray him and try to kill him

SomethingIDK
SomethingIDKLv12

Thanks for the help, I’ll check the story out.

Envyous_098:u know something like, she reject mc, she betray him and try to kill him
_Mimic_
_Mimic_Lv13

I can give the all clear. Just rejection.

SomethingIDK:Before I read and get invested in this story can I know what the NTR you mentioned in your review is? Is it just the rejection or is it more?
image
Other Reviews
Related Stories