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Heh_HehLv42yr
2022-02-28 20:48

THIS!!!! It’s literally a diamond in the rough. If you enjoy a demonic/hell theme or even just a well fleshed-out world, this is for you. If you like MCs that actually grow as characters, this is for you. Okay, the actual writing quality (grammar, spelling and whatnot) may not be perfect but I believe the author will improve in the future. Keep up the great work, author!!

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Caeruleum
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Heh_Heh
Heh_HehLv4

Author, maybe write your stories on Word/Grammarly first. They’re both free and I think it will benefit you greatly. Also, its though not tough; tough is strong, though is similar to however. I understand that it’s not your first language, I’m just trying to help :)

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Caeruleum
CaeruleumAuthor

Thanks I will try it once I have my own laptop back (:

Heh_Heh:Author, maybe write your stories on Word/Grammarly first. They’re both free and I think it will benefit you greatly. Also, its though not tough; tough is strong, though is similar to however. I understand that it’s not your first language, I’m just trying to help :)
2yr
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Caeruleum
CaeruleumAuthor

Thank you for your support. It really means a lot to me

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I love how mc isn’t necessarily evil, but would probably push someone off a cliff to see if gravity works. first chapter is kind of slow but it gets better afther that.

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Caeruleum
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Shameless review by me. Like any creator I can only see the flaws in my work. But I somehow got bronze prize in a writing contest, so it’s apparently not that terrible. Try it I guess

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There are some spelling mistakes but it is a bood story with an unique main character. Also the releases are stable and I really needed that.

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Mohanned_Elbadrey
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let me tell you this author drop this and I will hunt you down myself the story is great the characters are normal compared to other novels and the cover is great if you made it you should make a comic after you finish this

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shadow_serpent
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this book is really interesting. I feel like it could be fleshed out a bit more but otherwise not much to say. seeing as it's still roughly in its starting phase, I can't really say TOO much, considering there isn't much to go on. usually I'd wait till it had 100+ chapters but I figured why not just do it now. The characters are well made. the world's are done well. Overall story is a solid 9/10.

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