this is a good beggining in my book. i hope author don't forget that the mc was only a teenager before. so no matter how mature he is compare to kids his own age he still will be bit hotheaded. i hope u can give mc a good development. i hope mc makes mistake not because he is dumb but because he is new to what ever he is doing.and grow overcoming that mistake. i won't request mc to be strategic all knowing saint.but a mc with a good level head and common sense. if u can do it then the story will improve itself. the character of mc and it's development is important in such fic because the story revolve around him.so always make sure that's it's going good
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LIKEupadate. he ain't chunni bi tch and depressed weeb.he don't lose bearing.but he is going vigilante but more focus toward eliminating villain
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