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BlackFan
BlackFanLv52yr
2022-03-26 06:32

From the little that i have read, my impressions are that this is a rushed, non-sensical, confusing, lazy, etc story. Not for me.

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Kansuke5
Kansuke5Lv15

Rush is the KEYWORD

HydroNL
HydroNLLv10

This author is probably just writing for money and doesnt really care

The_Dark_Sapphire
The_Dark_SapphireLv12

It is lazy. Lots of plot holes and no suspense.

Ashmaster
AshmasterLv15

The cultivation levels are extremely screwed up and the rebate on the auction items is not made clear.

DaoistQVCa2B
DaoistQVCa2BLv4

bro if you are like that try to make a novel you will know the pain of creating a novel why because you need to creat something that out of nowhere

Comrak
ComrakLv12

the ending i feel is a little rushed as well as some parts but the story is aight.

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LaoTze
LaoTzeLv14

Summary: MC is originally a genius, but is kicked out of clan after his cultivation stagnates, and survives assassination attempts from within the clan. He's a transmigrator, and gets a system that returns a multiple times better object than anything he auctions off. Starts an auction house and proceeds to power up off of the returns of the auction system, around chapter 100 he's back to seek revenge. My opinion: this is only worth killing time if you can't find anything higher quality. - There are annoying holes in the plot, e.g. where is the MC getting objects from to auction --- if he re-auctions anything the system gave him as a reward, he won't get another reward from it? He builds his reputation on regularly auctioning high quality, rare objects, for cheap ... but where is his supply chain? - More chapters are spent in the auction house, describing objects we will never encounter again in repetitive detail, describing the facial expressions and feelings and conversations of the bidders, and detailing the sales process for each item in each auction... than chapters are spent on the actual events that move the plot forward. - The plot is clearly being stretched out with unnecessary complications and machinations (the MC thinking he's being clever by constructing an elaborate revenge plot) around the time I'm writing this review (on chapter 118). - The translation of an occasional sentence is completely nonsensical in an annoying way that lets you know that no one edited the chapters. Or sometimes the last words of a sentence is missing. I don't recommend this one. Stay away.

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