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2023-09-19 02:35

Story has a decent pace so it doesn't feel slow, but the author needs to go back and fix all the inaccuracies with names and genders they change practically every other sentence. For example the MC's name changes three time in one page or something is clearly stated that its a boy then it gets called a girl for half the page only to be called a boy again please fix this so that I can continue reading until then I unfortunately won't be able to continue the book as I'm too tired trying to figure who is who or what instead of focusing on the story.

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