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2022-03-05 03:22

I like these kinds of stories of returned people, etc. The quality of the writing is good, I did not find any grammatical errors, perhaps there are some insignificant ones. Very good update stability. The development of the story seems a bit slow to me, but I think it's the right thing to do at this point, I wish there were more movements in real life and not in the game. But it's a novel that is mainly about the game, so I shouldn't complain. The character designs are fine, and maybe in the future something will happen for the protagonist to change something. The world background of the game seems very big and a lot of stories with gods etc. And the main world of the protagonist outside the game seems normal, with many organizations, conglomerates, etc. A good read to pass the time, be entertained and have a laugh. Good luck to the author and keep making him want. overall score: 3.6

MMORPG: DELIVERANCE

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DarkTidings94
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Hi Guys and Dolls! Shameless self review coming in, as the their is nothing more depressing then seeing empty stars next to your novel. Just like to mention that over the next coupple of days I will be adding 10 to 20 chapters, I like to write them out and re-read them self over dozens of times before posting. I believe the story has started off at a fairly slow place, not to many info dumps yet, as I always found them annoying if they were to frequent in other novels. The story will start picking up to a fast speed walk between chapters 6-15 and then a light jog at 15-50. Whit a couple breaks in between to chill and charge up before some monster slaying and questing. Let me know your thoughts and I would also like to hear other readers favorite type moments in the reincarnation genre. Like face slapping, know it-all moments or revenge etc. Well that's all from me for now.

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JohnMichaels
JohnMichaelsLv14

I genuinely love this novel so far! Usually when you read the stories about someone going back years before a game started, the MC just spikes in power like they're a Saiyan. I really like the gradual growth I'm reading, keeps me interested without me going "Ah, yes- he's going to massively pummel any enemy without any problems, then do it again in 10 minutes." Keep up the good work!

2yr
BlackSoulWhiteSoul
BlackSoulWhiteSoulLv4

It is well whritten and I couldn’t find anything whrong with the grammary. The story is interesting 🧐 and somewhat unique of course it only just started so I can’t say anything more but I’ll defenitely enjoy this novel and the upcoming chapters👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊😎😬😎😬😎😬😎😬😎😬😎😬👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊👊

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DaoistTysFyP
DaoistTysFyPLv1

It is a good start. I personally enjoy returnee stories where the character rights wrong as well as kicks some butt. I like the idea of a world we’re gods play such a big part and they interact with everyone. I’m imagining some big battles between gods coming. The little movie nods are enjoyable too like the one for Sweeney Todd. All round seems to be on the right track. Keep up the work and I hope the chapters continue to come out as frequently as they are now.

2yr
KapuFinest808
KapuFinest808Lv13

FINALLY!! Ive been looking for a storY like this for awhile now!

2yr
YOYO_honey_singh
YOYO_honey_singhLv4

Writing is great Style and grammer is good update is daily so perfect for me Some comedy but good timing, has potential for improvement though Not much spoken abt game devs Not much abt how the world mc is living (real life) - maybe it will be told later I'm looking forward to how he will tackle all the real world ugliness (afterall tht is the reason for his rebirth)

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