Review Detail of Moodacle_tm_2 in Bear Reborn

I must say I am impressed. The depth and character your novel emanates is beautiful. The grammar, not one to be impressed with, does its job well. It tells the story of a human trapped in a bear created by a dungeon. We have not yet reached a place of large scale development for the story but it has been 4 star worthy. The human you have put into this bear is a afraid of pain and is obsessed with not feeling physical pain, which is relatable. I expect great things from you lad. - May the force be with you (From every Jedi I think of.)