This story has an interesting concept but the execution is... well. I'm good at looking the other way and ignoring a few little things here and there if it helps enjoy a good story, but this one pushes it a little too far. The characters are all way too young for what they do; the villainess schemes like an adult when she's only in kindergarten, the eight year old brother is an international super star and rides motorcycles, etc.
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LIKEYes I had to raise a few eyebrows when I realized her 8 year old, bro rode a motorcycle, maybe it’ a tiny one that was built for his stature? lol right at 3 years old she was already scheming? I’m just imagining them as teens, Does this mean this story will,be thousands of chapters long since she’ only 4 right now?s