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Review Detail of Unb_Ekannt in Shadow Slave

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This novel is really well written and one of the best, if not THE best webnovel/online-novel currently out there. The Character Designs and World Building are great. The characters have different and interesting personalities. They change with the progress of the story and developments. The world is well build and makes it possible to sink into it. The Story Development is also good. Sadly I had to lower the rating for the story from 5 to 4 stars thanks to the ending of arc 2 (?) - the ending of the antarctic campaign felt like a brainf*rt from the author. It didn´t make any sense at all and destroyed alot of the build-up. The quality/logic-drop felt especially frustrating since the quality of the chapters released is in general very high- unlike most other novels published online this novel doesn´t need to shy away from a comparison to offline-books of well known authors. I just wish the author of Shadow Slave would rewrite that particular part- with the publication being online he has the unique chance to do so..... I have read the novel and I will continue reading it. I also reread huge parts- which says alot. I read alot - like (tens of) thousands of pages of novels every year and the books I reread, so far, have all been from famous authors like Rowling, Cornwell, Brown etc. Found the novel online and just registered here on the original (?) website to comment. Other comments with low ratings for this novel leave a bad taste in my mouth- especially with alot of other online-novels getting high ratings even though the writing is bad. I don´t get it at all. You can have a different taste, but you should be able to recognize great work. I get that Shadow Slave is written for online publication- but I can´t help feeling that it is a waste. I would have prefered to buy the hardcover-books in the store and add it to my collection. Big brainf*rts might also have been avoided with less pressure to publish new "chapters" every day, the money might have been better and the criticism more professional and just.....

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Edit: Dunno why it was arc 2 in my mind. I meant the End of volume 5 ofc, the whole winter-beast-thing. It was full with logical holes and sunnys behaviour didn´t match his behaviour shown before or after at all.... rereading that part still makes me wanna throw the book against the wall. Almost quit Shadow Slave back then... -.-