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Previously, I rated this masterpiece with 5 stars, and now I have reduced it, and I would like to note the author of the reason The biggest negative point in the novel is the characters because they really lack depth and sufficient visibility I don't say it's bad it's good but it lacks vitality and the author doesn't bother to write his side characters and show their powers and abilities and ideas and goals and their point of view in the story like what happened in the last chapters I expected to see fights between the characters and an explanation of the forces and aspects And some tactics, but no, the author is really bad on the character side, each character that appears makes it an NPC, and if he builds a character, he destroys it quickly, like he did with clan characters in War Arcs, which we were eagerly waiting for. I hope that the author will deal well with his characters as he is very bad in this aspect and the last chapters were very warned because of this and the story will be destroyed because the essence of the stories are the characters

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