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Lewis_W_7526
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Well overall the book is really good,i'm all caught up I think.. anyway was expecting a n overpowered MC but we got sunny whose smart devious funny and strong which he doesn't seem to think he is which is my biggest problem ... he's just pathetic in an amazingly sugarcoated way,betrayed and seen like an add on among other things which makes him look like a back ground character or sidekick smh(in fact the betrayal part was just infuriating but ow well we are all friends now aren't we...he should've just strungled the blind girl) just shows how pathetic he is. .. he thinks for himself only when changing star isn't around... apart from that its a good read with an actual slave who will probably fall inlove with the master and follow them around for life unless the author surprises us in the future coz the power Sunny has, has an endless potential...(he can probably become his own slave with that weaver bloodline which still makes him a slave and not pathetic at all😂)...so at least make him powerful in the end, well not the actual end that is...still waiting for more chapters

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DaoistxRkCE4
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Fuck you for pointing out grammatical mistakes. People can't take negative opinions! If you are such a mighty adult, you would have known that there are 7+ billion people on this fucking planet. Not everyone reads/writes in english. Yet many actually make an effort to convey their opinions. Especially online. Oh, and yes, there are also children/young people online. Maybe you are 100 years old and you don't understand this futuristic concept since it was not there when you were young. What a retard... And the original comment actually pointed real opinions. Yet your response is so empty and aggressive. Makes me personally wonder who the real child is...

TungstenCube:With how poorly your grammar is, I perfectly understand your feelings. It’s effortless to see how a child would read this and feel this way.
TungstenCube
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With how poorly your grammar is, I perfectly understand your feelings. It’s effortless to see how a child would read this and feel this way.

Lewis_W_7526
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sure my grammar is poor....did you read what you wrote lol