Review Detail of Dan_Isl in Shadow Slave
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For prospective readers: personal recommendation is find something else. Why? Principally, lack of character development. Sunny's most frequent self-descriptions remain words like "panicked". After 400+ chapters, very little of substance has changed - only numbers on character sheet. Suspect author is trying to maximize word-count, as with almost every fiction on this site. This comes through in the writing, and the pace of the plot. Recommend going to RoyalRoad. Quality of Rank 100 on that site > quality of this story, going by satisfaction per time spent reading. Finally, author only responds to positive feedback. I.e., acts as an author completely insulated to criticism. This almost guarantees that flaws in story will continue to be unresolved for the next several hundred chapters.
Shadow Slave
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"Finally, author only responds to positive feedback. I.e., acts as an author completely insulated to criticism. This almost guarantees that flaws in story will continue to be unresolved for the next several hundred chapters." Considering how the author gives himself a 5 star and pats himself in the back then you're most likely right. The problem that showed up at the start of the novel and complained about by a lot of the negative reviews is never addressed.
NouH:"Finally, author only responds to positive feedback. I.e., acts as an author completely insulated to criticism. This almost guarantees that flaws in story will continue to be unresolved for the next several hundred chapters." Considering how the author gives himself a 5 star and pats himself in the back then you're most likely right. The problem that showed up at the start of the novel and complained about by a lot of the negative reviews is never addressed.