Review Detail of alsiee in Shadow Slave
Review detail
Classic Western style novel, with an angsty 'misfit' MC, very annoying. Lots of cringe dialogue, with characters yammering over trivial matters in the midst of a tenuous situation, before they reach safety. The combat sequences and other scenarios are way overdramatized like a Discovery channel video, with massive amounts of fake tension (eg second half of chapter 95). 2/5 IGN
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Yep. Know what you mean. The author tends to write a lot of reduncies in or out of combat. And it’s especially annoying during combat that seem to be the sake for hitting work count rather than actual detail. He’s explaining the scene and a whole paragraph and then it goes, “for me, that is”. Like MF WE KNOW KEEP STOP RUINING THE FLOW. It’s incredibly annoying. Most writers wrote what he did after volume 1 in like 40-60 chapters.
Warning! Spoilers for Chapter 95 below: I read through the specific chapter you mentioned again, and I don't really understand what you're trying to say. Why shouldn't there be tension after an unexpected ambush and the disappearance of your comrade. The description off Nephis' injuries when she climbs back on the hand, sure maybe you could condense it a bit, but it's not like they don't serve a purpose. They serve to show the power of the monsters in the dark sea, show how Nephis barely managed to escape, and highlight the intense effects of her abilities, allowing her to heal herself from near death. I'm sure there are other reasons as well that I missed or don't remember off the top of my head. I fail to see what's wrong in this chapter, could you please explain what you saw wrong in the context of chapter 95?
Bad_At:Warning! Spoilers for Chapter 95 below: I read through the specific chapter you mentioned again, and I don't really understand what you're trying to say. Why shouldn't there be tension after an unexpected ambush and the disappearance of your comrade. The description off Nephis' injuries when she climbs back on the hand, sure maybe you could condense it a bit, but it's not like they don't serve a purpose. They serve to show the power of the monsters in the dark sea, show how Nephis barely managed to escape, and highlight the intense effects of her abilities, allowing her to heal herself from near death. I'm sure there are other reasons as well that I missed or don't remember off the top of my head. I fail to see what's wrong in this chapter, could you please explain what you saw wrong in the context of chapter 95?
