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Review Detail of Mr_Dreamer in Shadow Slave

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Mr_Dreamer
Mr_DreamerLv21yrMr_Dreamer

world background and writing quality of this novel is top noch ..alas other than that all things gone tooo much down side after begining of 2nd volume (around 120 chapter or somthing) you who is thinking to read this novel be aware ..yess you will gonna like this novel very much because of mc's character and actions on 1st volume but after that from 2nd volume is allllll LOooosttttt ...at one point it seems author himself forgot how he made mc's character and it will pain to see mc's actions on 2nd volume ...so if you like to see how an alfa intelligent ruthless mc becomes idiot wimp beta side character in 2nd volume of the novel than you can happily start reading now otherwise don't bother with this ...i have droped this after reading 2nd volumes 100 chapters of somthing where mc's idiotic actions are hard to bearable and all focused are got on the Fmc ...author if you are reading this comments do work on mc's character if you don't wanna losse more readers otherwise šŸ™

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kassimo
kassimoLv3kassimo

I agree I dropped it at chapter 129 I think they are still stuck in that place even after chapter 170

hydraspare
hydraspareLv14hydraspare

Ah yes, everyone is without flaws. Man has no backing, of course heā€™s gonna act lowkey. I truly donā€™t see a point when you say heā€™s a beta?

hydraspare
hydraspareLv14hydraspare

They are still in the dream realm to the most recent chapter.

kassimo:I agree I dropped it at chapter 129 I think they are still stuck in that place even after chapter 170
JcnPeng
JcnPengLv15JcnPeng

They are still stuck after chapter 300.

kassimo:I agree I dropped it at chapter 129 I think they are still stuck in that place even after chapter 170
PlebLord
PlebLordLv4PlebLord

So, you didn't have anything to say when the OP said the MC's character is good in Volume one but becomes awful in Volume two?

hydraspare:Ah yes, everyone is without flaws. Man has no backing, of course heā€™s gonna act lowkey. I truly donā€™t see a point when you say heā€™s a beta?
hydraspare
hydraspareLv14hydraspare

Nope because I domt see how his character becomes awful.

PlebLord:So, you didn't have anything to say when the OP said the MC's character is good in Volume one but becomes awful in Volume two?
Krist
KristLv3Krist

Please do not listen to this guy, his character does change during the second novel but it all makes sense if you actually finish reading the volume. His character is also not nearly as bad as this guy says. He remains a good character.

Bad_At
Bad_AtLv1Bad_At

Please explain to me how the main character became an "idiot wimp beta side character"? I see many people say stuff similar to this but without good reason.

hydraspare
hydraspareLv14hydraspare

Cuz they all think he should be fhe op male lead who cant lose and cant just follow someone elseā€™s idea.

Bad_At:Please explain to me how the main character became an "idiot wimp beta side character"? I see many people say stuff similar to this but without good reason.
v_nolan
v_nolanLv1v_nolan

after cassie essentially enslaved him we thought he would get revenge on her at least. but not only he didn't but he felt guilty because he lashed out on her. this level of simping is unbearable. especially in contrast with how his character was presented in the beginning. it is insult to the readers.

Bad_At:Please explain to me how the main character became an "idiot wimp beta side character"? I see many people say stuff similar to this but without good reason.
Meow_Sama
Meow_SamaLv11Meow_Sama

You asked and got your answer. Please reply to the above comment, author. Lol, don't hide behind another account and reply directly.

Bad_At:Please explain to me how the main character became an "idiot wimp beta side character"? I see many people say stuff similar to this but without good reason.
Wandering_Soul_UwU
Wandering_Soul_UwULv14Wandering_Soul_UwU

Alpha and beta do not exist convey ur thoughts in a more correct way u imbecile. Say rather authoritative instead of alpha or whatever.

laylag145
laylag145Lv15laylag145

Even if he wanted to kill her, how would he? I mean, come on? Imagine plotting to assassinate someone with her aspect.

v_nolan:after cassie essentially enslaved him we thought he would get revenge on her at least. but not only he didn't but he felt guilty because he lashed out on her. this level of simping is unbearable. especially in contrast with how his character was presented in the beginning. it is insult to the readers.
laylag145
laylag145Lv15laylag145

I admit the beginning and end of volume 2 were bitter pills to swallow, but volume 1 instilled in my some faith in the authorā€™s ability to carry the prose. We clearly have underlying themes about breaking free from inescapable fate. In my opinion, the characters make reasonable decisions given their situations, and Iā€™m willing to see it through to the end.