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2022-02-24 04:21

Really enjoyed reading the first couple of chapters so far! It's quite thrilling, entertaining, and it builds on the character development slowly. There are some points where I feel too confused about the background of the characters but overall it's a good read, and the writing is fun and there are a lot of unexpected moments that really cause a reaction from the reader, and that shows the skill of the author! Well done.

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