The plot of the story is a bit too fast. You can use chapter one to explain how Will works as a farmer. It's fast enough for me. Apart from that, I had to read it twice enough to understand the content of the story. Even though it didn't satisfy me in the end, I'm sure the author will improve the storyline of this novel.
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