Review Detail of IamMountTai in Parallel Memory

CRITICAL REVIEW For a person not having English as their 1st language, the writing is legible and can be understood. As long as you can enjoy the story, it doesn't matter. The biggest thing that holds this novel back is originality. No matter what. I cannot keep myself from comparing this to Author's POV. There are too many things similar and the novel doesn't try to be different enough to make the initial premise acceptable. That's really bad because it makes this not only appear like a cheap carbon copy but also make the novel look trash. A similar series who was also inspired by Entrail_J and "The Novels' Extra" ---"The Extra's Survival", does much better in this regard, and I was able to quickly differentiate it as its own story. Here are only SOME things I found similar. Hero hates demon Hero forced to use System ability in dire straits making him go super saiyan. Earl demon classification. Blood supremacy advocate teacher. Finding OP technique before academy - Acceptable but done very poorly. MC's teacher looking like she's giving special treatment to MC. Also similar to Donna (Teacher in Author POV) Devil contractors - Acceptable Hero's arrogant rival obsessed with x heroine Character rankings are similar. Classifications- Acceptable... What I dislike the most would the MC tech nonsense. If apps exist in the world, then why do such significant tech programs and services do not exist already? Creative content is not much is said to be mentioned? But we weren't given any world building to know this. Also what is the level of the world's technology? There's clearly phones and apps.... The company stuff is poorly executed and very rushed. Continuing on, he seems to have god-like knowledge of technology because of his SS ability. But from what the story is shown it doesn't really SEEM like it could do that. Are his memories of his alternative self so vivid and powerful that he can replicate such skills? Clearly not- Example: author talks how that computer science mc self is "far better" in maths than the current mc which is required for coding, business etc. Heck, it said early that he seemed to grasp alot of knowledge of the main plot from another world, but I barely see him preparing for the next current events of a supposed plot of a novel. Yes the storyline is messed up, but what about the big things that are coming. All we see is him training and cough business. Even if you can argue x things happen, there's clearly no planning involved. So there must be something good about the novel right? I mean its still enjoyable but when forced to compare with Author's POV... smh. Sadly, I really can't think of anything that made this novel be Unique. I did quite like the mc attempt be a crazy guy in love to follow what he did in another world in an attempt to follow the plot another world though. Ofc that wouldn't live long. Despite my harshness, I hope this author can do their best to make the story branch away from its inspiration. I ship Sylvia and the MC! The teacher route with the age difference is quite awkward. You could try playing around with the playboy drama to make things interesting. First Lisa, then Mia, then Sylvia! Who would win in the end?!