Hi author: just a suggestion but imo I think there should be more action because for an event that could have been made into 1-2 chapter its being extended into 4-5 due to all the info mentioned and while that is nice; it becomes a bit frustrating that for every major event instead of getting more details on the event, there is more details into backstory which makes it hard to keep up and remember what even was the event itself. For example when she came to the place, to when she was going to end the mate bond, to the battle between the species, and now when she is meeting Lord Kodin; I cant even remember much of the events but only that there was a lot of background or inner monologue which takes away from the actual events. However despite this, the story itself is great! I enjoy reading all of it nonetheless, just wish for a bit more action! Of course this is all my opinion and still a lovely story! Cant wait to read more ^^
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Hi there, thank you for your suggestion, I understand what you mean. I've been trying to chip in as much information on Zariah's previous lifetime as possible because at some point, we won't be returning to it anymore. I don't want the plot to drag though, so I'll keep this in mind. Thanks again.
Ahhh I see! I get what you are trying to do; I’m just someone who likes more action bc of how many different novels I read per day 😅 however still really enjoy your story!
JHeart:Hi there, thank you for your suggestion, I understand what you mean. I've been trying to chip in as much information on Zariah's previous lifetime as possible because at some point, we won't be returning to it anymore. I don't want the plot to drag though, so I'll keep this in mind. Thanks again.
