ok so, there are two problems in this story that most people may agree with. first one is updating speed... and second are characters or to be specific, depending on you, MC and others may fit your taste or not, but i must mention that later on in the story characters change their behaviour to some degree so you may want to stay and see if the change is up to your taste
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