The mc is suppose to be Anos Voldigoad from The Misfit of Demon King Academy but he acts nothing like it. Sure you can argue that this is more then 5 trillion years into the future but doesnt change the fact that he is nothing like the original Anos. The author contradicts things. For an example Anos was super excited that he made friends with Veldora but then let him get eaten by Rimuru. Because? Because Aisha said it would be intressting. The author even said in the beginning that he was a person who takes great intrest in his family and friends/subordinates. And his creed was to never kill people needlessly. But he let Veldora get eaten because it would be intresting, I really don't know where his lines are drawn, letting his friend die because it would be intresting really goes against his personality. And why is he acting like a kid all of a sudden in chapter 2? He takes on the form of a kid because he didn't want to be noticed by the primodrials. But why though? They can't hurt him or do anything to him. Why would he need to hide? Don't get those plotholes. Overall the writing and the concept is good. It may just be me being angry over you ruining one of my favorite anime/manga character. But keep doing what you do. And I mean no offence by this review. If you can handle that the mc isn't really Anos then you would enjoy this I believe.
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I will read it rewritten one for sure. Keep it up you are very talented, you just need more practice :)
ahmadjamal9820:Yeah, I am really thinking the same thing. I think I will rewrite the fanfic. Thanks for your opinion. I appreciate it.