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BobboLobbo
BobboLobboLv43yr
2022-02-10 10:40

Although it's a nicely written story, it isn't for me. The MC was in a gang yet easily gets manipulated. The plot holes are somewhat consistent, one being, when kakashi asks the MC, "who are you", the MC replies, "I am someone who is not from this-" and ends there. Normally he would've and should've said, I'm Kai (MC's name) but plot hole breaks through another story. Anyway, if you don't like a manipulated MC, this ain't for you.

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MarSus
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Hi! Thanks for the review! Very helpful and i agree with you, thus i’ll try to think and change that part in order to make it smoother :) really appreciate it

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MarSus:Hi! Thanks for the review! Very helpful and i agree with you, thus i’ll try to think and change that part in order to make it smoother :) really appreciate it
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