Review Detail of eudine in Fox with an odd system

I love how you’re progressing the story so far! I adore The main character, she seems like a very bubbly and energetic girl. I love her dialogue and her inner thoughts, it’s quite humorous. The only critique I have is that the grammar could be improved, and that some parts feel quite empty (and can be further expanded/explained). Despite that, I think this is a great read. Keep it up, author!